Monday 5 October 2009

Chapter 5

Basic Plot
Boy is walking through town with his friend, he notices a good looking girl. They go over to speak to her, he gets her number and they walk off. He rings her up later and they meet to go to the bowling. After they finish they hug and say goodbye but as he does his girlfriend see's him, he turns around and see's her crying. She runs off, he looks at his phone and gets a text from her, she ends the relationship. Camera rewinds back to where he met the first girl and this time he deletes the number and texts his girlfriend saying "i love you".

This was influenced by a music video i saw on youtube called "DNA - Never wanna lose you" which involves a boy who used to meet a lot of girls but not stick with any, but he meets a girl he likes but is being unfaithful to her. He talks about if she finds out she'll end it with him but he has finally fell in love with someone so he can't tell her but inside he know she deserves better.

Actual Script and screne play
(High angle shot, try and get some height to look down on the boys)Two boys walk through crawley memorial gardens along the path.(Camera will change from behind then, to the side of them, to infront of them. Maybe with a low shot angle). A good looking girl walks past them in the opposite direction. (Close up of girl and two boys as they both look at each other) They turn around and walk towards her. (camera in front of the girl as the boys are walking). Boy asks for the girls number (slight closeup on the mobile phones and then close up on the girl as she smiles) Camera blacks. Next scene camera is looking at the boy and girl talking outside the cinema. (High angle shot from the top of megaplex car park). Boy opens the door for her and she walks in (camera shot from both inside looking in and outside looking in) Random snap shots of them playing bowling. Finally slow shot as the boy and girl holding hands walking out the bowling allly. (shot from behind in slow motion). Next different shots of boy and girl hugging from all angles. (Slow quite music in the backround, possibly “Seether – Broken (acoustic instrumental then into real song) Close up of boys girlfriend looking on from outside the cinema, slowly turns around and looks shocked. Camera shows the the boy and girl hugging. He opens his eyes over her shoulder and sees his girlfriend. (Broken song drops into verse) Girl starts crying and he tries to follow her but she runs off. (fades to black)
Camera rewinds to the beginning back to where he meets the girl. Close up on his mobile phone as he deletes the number then sends his girlfriend the message “song”

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